Saturday, 14 November 2020

group crit

I feel like killing Eve isn't that applicable in terms of a typeface the thing that that has is that is animated which creates interest. Oscar suggested to keep it in like a orange yellow and green scheme in terms of colours of website but I'm not sure if doing it as I can follow on mango would be a good shout. I need to do a bit more exploration with the type and test some other less legible ways of doing it I think I need to make it personality within the typeface of the logo. They also suggested to lean into that knew just stay in a bowl scheme come up I feel like it might be an issue as they're not fully sustainable and they got a bit of criticism about the clothing not being as good in the sustainable range. They also said that just keep in mind that it's a contemporary audience which I think is quite obvious and I don't know well that would change anything I need to do some more exploration coz the few I have at the minute just doesn't work quite as well as I'd want. 


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