I want to make a suggestion to have a bit of variations. I made the typeface for the other quote using the same method. On the isometric grid. I then took into illustrator and cleaned it up and like toggle a few parts of it to make it all fit better in the grid. As they see, the blue is the illustrator lines compared to the black which is the procreate lines.
I wanted to test out all the different colour combinations. Other figured out, but the best combination is black background, white squiggles and green text, but it also works with switching the green and white. It's just slightly less legible with a white text. Ask it usually is the case.
I felt it was slightly too cluttered with all the squiggles Sai removed, some of them and change the size of them and also added a photo. This allowed, but be a bit more visual interest to the whole thing. But it's still independent of what have seeing it, as it allows you to be put into that hole without being forced to. I added the logo as to give it a context and I do quite like it. In my critique, they did say it was quite good, which brings me a bit of joy and I think I'm fine with this. I'm just going to mock up some placements of it for the submission and it should be fine. I think maybe some small tweaks.
I felt it was slightly too cluttered with all the squiggles Sai removed, some of them and change the size of them and also added a photo. This allowed, but be a bit more visual interest to the whole thing. But it's still independent of what have seeing it, as it allows you to be put into that hole without being forced to. I added the logo as to give it a context and I do quite like it. In my critique, they did say it was quite good, which brings me a bit of joy and I think I'm fine with this. I'm just going to mock up some placements of it for the submission and it should be fine. I think maybe some small tweaks.
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