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 I wanted to ask in my about how to present my website cos I'm having issues in terms of it not looking done when it's actually done.  they said to screen record going through the website and fake it and put like the ex and put down signs for 4the websites also have a bit of variations in terms of images used and just use a simple iMac ass the mock-up Simon did say was ok with a mockup which is more than I thought. 

 I also asked what to do with my photos and the mushroom book because it's doesn't feel quite done but Simon seem to like my type city and the images and he said it felt quite sorted the only thing that he said was to rethink that illustration so maybe hi either all and not both and definitely not over that cos it puts it off a bit.  you liked my grid though.  your suggested having some sort of code a catalogue or key to make the website more expensive so if I had a catalogue of types of mushrooms and they'd have a sort code of either like a number series or a colour and number something like that that would be really cool and I love that idea.  you're so suggested having tabs or like different levels of it to represent the mushroom Gills.  and do some layering which would be kind of fun and I'll test it out on some scrap pieces of paper and how would be in a book to see how it would feel.